My dress is on the floor
dropped right down
when you called me a whore
I'd say 'game-over'
but smelling like clover
I feel like trying once more
You took my crow paws and said
I'd look much prettier
without those on my head
You gave me some chicken legs
but I didn't smile,
no I went for a run, instead
The oranges I carry around
make me feel safe,
but also make me feel sound
Though when you saw them,
you took them and said
'I take what's lost, and make it found'
When I got upset
you remembered me of,
that dress
Saying 'do you remember, that dress?'
And I thought 'I'd much rather, be a naked mess'
But I'm not, that really into jazz
And I took your straw
par example, what for?
I used it to even my chair
and I think that action was fair
more fairer than yours
But I'm still your whore, of course
Yes. Hmm. Well.
I'll just read it over tomorrow. Lekker slapen x.
maandag 23 maart 2009
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This is very nice, but I disagree, you'd look just as pretty with the crow's paws still on your head =P
Slight english note, "you reminded me" not "you remembered me." The syllables are the same so it shouldn't effect the meter, but it improves the grammar ;-]
"Lekker slapen" = I want to sleep? Sleep is tempting?
Ohh yes thanks, haha I always make that mistake! :)
Lekker Slapen.. I guess it's pretty much the same as sleep well.
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